It was incredible there was so many beautiful flowers my favorite one was the white rose.It look so cool I don't why but I felt like eating it.
then we went to the tower the view was scary ,I felt like throwing up.Then I saw a really small humming bird I almost got to see it , and then I saw a really big spider.Later I saw black with yellow stripes ,I got scared but it wasn't poisons.I hoep I can go there next time.
Alfredo,
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